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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person chem chick
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I loved the Sasuke dream. And 42. Very funny! It was definitely worth the wait! Get rested and over the jet lag, then more chapters, please! With a cherry on top!
person tesp71283
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapt, a little bland but smooth in warming the audiences again after a break and reassuring the audience who the pairings are and where the plot stands. I thought Sasuke's dream was suspiciously enlightening, his subconcious must be picking up the right vibes. Anyway keep up the good work!
person The Empress
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, I thought it was over when Naruto caught one of Sasuke's fangirls kissing him. *wipes sweat from forehead* Phew! Good thing Naruto isn't a dummy. I was actually trembling at that part. I can't wait to read the next chappie! I'm gonna have to wait anyway. =P Hee hee.

Btw, Of course I didn't forget you. I've been waiting 2 months for you to come back. ^_^ *throws a welcome back party for you and hands you a super ice cream sundae with almonds, m&ms, caramel and chocaloate fudge with 2 cherries on top* ^_^ Yay! Welcome back! *Throws streamers and stuff*
person tesp71283
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i forgot to add i enjoyed the neji soap opera reminising and catching naruto scene.
person Kami Kaze
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waahh! I've waited so long for this chapter...you've made my day! ^___^ A fun chapter, as always... I liked how at the beginning Sasuke got a little (via the dream) hint on what it was that Naruto wants to hear from him. Gah...will the baka ever get it right? T_T Oh, and the hinted jealousy that Naruto tried to hide was great! Glad you're back with us!
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah! So glad you're back (hope you had a nice time). It's been a while since I read chapter 14 but it's great to see Naruto's perspective and the fact that he is actually quite into Sasuke. Ah, so Sasuke's finally getting clued up! I wasn't sure whether to laugh or cringe at Maria's behaviour - it reminded me far too much of my own lack of social graces around boys when I was...err...a lot younger.... Hmm, I wonder if Neji has a cunning plan....
person just_me
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you're back. Oh, I completely swooned seeing and reading the new chappie. I really missed this story. :'(
Neji should seriously cut the soap-opera's. He's starting to act like a Desperate Housewive. :P
I think I'm going to re-read it all to get out of my withdrawal completely. Yup, but not tonight... pissed off parents is not something i want to deal with in the middle of the night... ^^;;;
But heck ya. You're back. *does happy dance*
person MultifacetedTune
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is exstatic that you updated* Yippeeeeeeee!!! ^^;;;;; Okay, so as pathetic as it is, I will freely admit that I have been checking the site every day since the 30th of July to see if you'd updated yet. *figured that being a few days early wouldn't hurt anything* So needless to say, you just made my day...erm......week. Yeah. ^^ But I really am sooooo glad that you're back, 'cause it's just so hard to find a fic like this one now-a-days. So here is the expected "welcome home" gift *throws chocolates at you* and now, you simply must tell me all about your trip! *reeeeeeeally wants to go to Japan someday* Oh, and don't forget to keep up the good work and update ASAP, as always!!! ^___~ Ja ne!!!
person yukiko
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is aliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiive *does an happy naked dance with bishies!!!!!*

sorry, I'm working at a boring place and my mind melted.

Have you seen naruto cover 1? the pose is soooooooooooooooooo subjective and hentai O.o just look at it!!

Awww, I kinda feel bad about Neji, but I'm a big sasufan so I'll be okay.
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.My.God. o_o

This is truly frustrating me. xD -Reads story twice- I can't see how you can avoid Sasuke and Naruto finally telling eachother, but you do such a wonderful job! Better than I can. x_x Bt...That chapter was good. Yes, good -cackles-

I find it amusing that Neiji has no idea what's going on other than Naruto 'dating' Sasuke...

I don't even remember that being arranged. xD

Or was Naruto just pulling his leg?

Ah, I guess I"ll have to figure it out next chapter.

And WELCOME BACK!!!

I missed you. ;.;

Sa-chan

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