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for Chasing Naruto

by megladon129

person Hitomi
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 13)
Awww... Neji's "Blazing Look of Death ™" is dah bomb! XDD
No nejiXGaara? Sad. I hope those boys will get to be with *someone* at the end; let's be kind, ne?^^

I'm so jealous! You're going to Japan! Gahh!! Have fun and go see some live Jrock shows! Grrrr I'd go see Kagrra *is in love* XPPP

Anyway, sweet chapter; the opening scene, with Naruto barely resisting glomping Sasuke [who could?!], was so adorable! I love Pretty Boy!Sasuke - that's one hell of a pretty Sasuke. XDD

Awating your final pre-Japan chapter,
Until then,
Ja ne~
person Yami Jay
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really feel bad for Neji on this one; 7 years? God! The guy needs to move on.
person Rowan
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good job, i love this fanfic, please post one more before you leave for Japan, and bye the way, have a fun time in Japan!!
person shizuou
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *squeel* holy shit..ake mushrooms
Your writing is fatabulous!!!! Omgggg I cant wait for you
to update. I absolutly loe this fic to friggen peices!!!!
Dear god I hope you update soon! Pleaseee do so!
I cant wait. God I love it love it loveitloveitloveit
LOVE IT -INSERT 35096803476 HEARTS-
Uhm, my e-mail isnt working but I would like
a heads up when you update! If you have AIM
my AIM is (shizuou) Have fun updating!!!!!
xo rhichan xo
person animegirl
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEEEEYYYYYYYYY, another amazing chappie!!!! i love you, this story totally kicks ass! i'd loved the part where naruto got "friendly" during his morning snooze and the flustered sasuke was soooo funny, i was laughing my ass off, hehe. Poor boy just can't get any, but the suspense is great, it'll make the smutty parts all the better. i hope sasuke tells naruto he cares about him soon, i don't know how much more of this i can take, i want to see them together soooooo bad. though i do feel bad for neji and garra, but narusasu must reign surpreme, HORAY for narusasu lovin!!!!
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AGH. Attack of the killer flashbacks. I really dislike it when authors designate flashbacks with symbols. >_< I think they look better written in italics, that way my brain will remember that the scene isn't in the main timeline. I liked the backstory though, despite it's cheesiness. XD
person kai
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
7 yrs is a long time for a crush, poor neji!!
anyways, great update, i really enjoy the shameless teasing from naruto about sasuke! it's so funny. I really enjoy reading your fics, you write them so well!!
so what happens now, since we know naruto likes sasuke??
UPDATE SOON!
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LONG LIVE NEJIXNARU!!!!!!
person Jadej.j
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gods I want to see Sasuke with Naruto I know ya making a great story but still... this is driving me nuts...Sasuke and Naruto please
person Laz
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*makes whimpering sound*

I was staring at the screen... waiting... giggling... ^__^ But again, wonderful chapter and I LOVE your sense of humor in this fic. I hope to heaven that it's going to be a Sasuke/Naruto fic, because I think I'd simply cry if it wasn't. Such a good chapter and soooo close...

^.~ Although you did appease your fans with that lovely lemon you wrote earlier...

:)

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