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person Anon
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No, please DON'T stop writing, cuz you're good! I loved Naruto's comments throughout the whole thing. "That's it! Pull out now!" XD That cracked me up.
person Exane
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would like more lemon please...this is good!!~
please write more/update soon ^^
person FutsukayoiDa ;P
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waowi...I love it.
You're really good at writing lemons..hehe yes you are XD
>.<
person demonesse
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nonoooo... this doesnt suck at all!! i lurrrve it.. it really works, and everyone's (well just the 2 of'em) are really in character too!

i like! you should be writing more!
person Monkey Lady
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, nice. :) I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one...but good Sasuke/Naruto smut is always nice. I hope you will write more...perhaps a sequel.
person dark mousey
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, that was a very good closing line. hits the story home. thanks for sharing.
person Ezj
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not complaining ^___^
Me want more ^.^'''

person Biokinetic
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*jaws drops*
Jesus..that was intense.
*clears throat and wipes away drool* That was an beyond awesome sexy lemon chapter. Pleasepleaseplease..write another story or sequal like this extremely soon..please..
person macy
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gwaaa~~ i like it. heeheee...^^ i like the magically appearing lube! hahaha!
person Snnell
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh.. fluffy and lemony. juz the way i love them! ^^ don't stop!! it's really nice ^^

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