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by CrystalChild

person Sailor Kismet
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And That drabble was beautiful. It was emotional, so sad and full of longing. I hope you write another in Sasuke's POV.
person phoenixdown7
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet and heartbreaking...I was surprised that it was so emotionally evective. It really encapsulates what I think Naruto feels about Sasuke...even if the love is platonic and not romantic. The feelings can be intertwined and the repercussions for both characters can be similar. I loved this! I will be watching for future stories from you. ^_^
person Kusachu
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is nice! short and sweet! Inspired by the episode 128 i wonder? NARUTO ON TOP OF SASUKE!!! AAAAHHHH!!!! sorry....just having a wierd moment.....anywho....you plan on making a story of this?
person LtF
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Taking deep breaths here... its so..melancholic... right now I have that feeling, you know, where you read or feel something sad and you take deep breaths because it feels like you have a weight in your lungs? This is beautifully written, and I hope to see a nice long ff from you soon :D
person Kori Nibiki
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... ::softly smiles:: Wow. That was moving.... inspiring. An excellent one-shot. Would like to see more of your work. Till then, Ja!
person Shez
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice work; dark. I like it. Quick little note, though. Drabbles are always 100 words. No more, no less. No such thing as a drabble with over 100 words. =3
person Crystal Child
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, oops? Oh well...I totally didn't know that...I don't really know what to lable this as, then, since I really can't lable it as fanfiction. >_> oh wells...thanks for telling me -_-;;

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