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by pellaz

person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1) Loved it, 2) Thanks for the quick update, 3) Can't wait for the next chapter, and 4) Keep up the good work. ^___~ There: a concise review! *yawns* Okay, I'm going to bed now...... Ja ne!
person Agacissko
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!omg! I LOOVEE YOOOOOOOU!!! XD i rea;y reallllllyyyyyyy DO :D (not that way, ya know lol XD) next chapters! YAAAAAAY! im sooo glad i was wrong! (ive never though i would say it :P hehe) so yea, sorry, it really sounded like ending XD stupid me :P
i really enjoyed new chapters, and now, im gonna diee waiting for continuation :D please be quick!!!!
person akuma_river
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.
person Snnell
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh.. i can't wait to see what happens next.. hope u'll update soon ^^
person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aahhh!!! Noooooo!!! Naruto!!! *glomps* Don't die!!! (Not that he -will-, what with Kyuubi, and all, but still.........) ^___~ Thanks so much for updating -- I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Hmmm......I wonder how Naruto will manage to free Sasu-kun? *goes off to discuss that with her fellow Naruto-obsessed friends during their weekly WOND meeting........along with numerous reaasons as to Why Orochimaru Needs to Die, of course........* ^___~ (And no, before you ask, that doesn't really exist -- it's just my pathetic attempt at being humerous, is all.....) XP Keep up the good work!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!
person ST
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to admit. this is getting better and better.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for updating!!! *gives you chocolates* ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!
person twisted-sheets
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
there were errors? I didn't notice...maybe because I was crying so hard...XD
person ST
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it just gets better with each chapter.
person Caspian
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I’m surprised how cheerful I was to see this new part up. I’ve been enjoying this fic more than I realized, but haven’t reviewed before because I’m a lazy bastard. I like your older, wiser, still mildly retarded Naruto. I like your melancholy Sakura and your resigned Hinata. I really like Naruto’s genin team, particularly Hikaru. Naruto’s always needed more badass girls. I can’t wait to see more interaction between Naruto and Sasuke/Orochimaru. I’d like to Sasuke rescued, but I guess “rescuing” isn’t really the issue, or at least not any differently than it ever has been between those two. Hope you update soon. (^.^) Thanks for sharing.

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