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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, very sexy. I love Sasuke's internal battle, with himself and his demons. you really are getting good. Keep up the good work.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, lol. I believe it :P
I am not into S&M stuff, but hehe, it's the hotness of Naruto that is soooo compelling to me!!! gyahhh!!! looooooove~ <3
i can't pinpoint anything about your writing, cause I'm just so captivated in the eroticism of the fic, lol. So, keep it like that :P where we just get too captivated to analyze.
I am not into S&M stuff, but hehe, it's the hotness of Naruto that is soooo compelling to me!!! gyahhh!!! looooooove~ <3
i can't pinpoint anything about your writing, cause I'm just so captivated in the eroticism of the fic, lol. So, keep it like that :P where we just get too captivated to analyze.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ehhhh
it deleted the rest of my review
i was saying that i cant pinpoint anything about your writing style, cause i'm just captivated by the ero-ness of it heh! :P so keep it like that!
it deleted the rest of my review
i was saying that i cant pinpoint anything about your writing style, cause i'm just captivated by the ero-ness of it heh! :P so keep it like that!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
to short too short more more more more more MORE! come on i love this stuff your the best are you boy are you girl i need to know so i can call you nee/nii chan!!!
email me -.~ smooch!
email me -.~ smooch!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHA that attitude will kill him! great chapter. naruto doesn't seem to be acting hoosexual anymore. haha
but i don't mind it, don't mind it at all! no real grammar mistakes. good job. update sometime soon again.
i'd be greatly appreciated by many of us! =D
but i don't mind it, don't mind it at all! no real grammar mistakes. good job. update sometime soon again.
i'd be greatly appreciated by many of us! =D
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I seriously love this fic!!! and I love it when Sasuke gives into instinct. it makes things sooo much more interesting.XD
pleases update soon! I really want to read more!
pleases update soon! I really want to read more!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful.great,brilliant,hot,hot,hot and funny as hell!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh...SUGE~!!! That was mouth-watering, deliciously sensous but SHORT (T-T) dance. i can feel a nose-bleed coming on. Heh.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! *glomps* Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! ^___^ Now then: *gives you chocolates, a pen, and some paper* ...go write more!!!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was, drool. yea . . . . . . . wow