rate_review Reviews

It really seems OOC.

This is so fucked up XD
I don't think it's a bad fanfic, but its just... very... adventurous?

You threw quite a curve ball in this chapter. I was sure she was pregnant.

I'm glad to read a story about Lee. You're right, this site has become almost exclusive NaruSasu. The fans of that couple have every right to read about it, but it's not for me so I rarely find anything I like.

The pregnancy thing is a bit old, and Neji is really, really OOC. Still, I like your portrayal of Lee. He's adorable.

Not bad. I liked the sweetness between Lee and Tenten, but I think she offered herself to him a bit too easily. I mean, usually you don't just bathe naked with your flatmate just like that. Also, the ending could have been better.

I really love your story. I have to confess that this was the first story i read on AFF and i fell in love with it. Please please please continue with it. BTW i looooove the way you write Lee! You do him soo well!!! He is just so cute and adoribal who wouldn't love him!!!

I just couldn't stop reading and then when I got to the end I was like "that's it!?" ;_; (haha...I even went through it again just to see if there was anything else I missed!) It's sooooo good and sweet ^^ You've made me a believer in TenLee (I never like NejiTen anyways! bah!) and I'm glad you wrote such a WONDERFUL fic on it (which we all know is something totally rare!)....Waaaaaii~~~!!! You totally captured their characters, especially Tenten despite her lack of one in Naruto....I love it soo much....it's totally inspired me!! ^^

Ah, I really like this story. I love how people give attention to good ol' Lee. OMG, YOU'RE WRITING A STORY ABOUT SHINO?! I LOVE YOU! Shino is my all time favorite character. XD I wish he was real, because if he was, he would be hosting many pants parties for us fangirls, if you know what I mean ^_^

nice story