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person april
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...huh,huh,huh...ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh WOW I LOVE IT JUST LOVE IT DO MORE NOW!!! email me ~-~
person eternal
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi this my review!
NICE ONE!
Can't wait the gaanaru pairing and sasu naru it's really great!
Pleaseeee update soon
Ps: I love threesome too ^_~ just make sure naruto is the uke mwa ha ha love when he was the uke not seme ^-^
person mE
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GaaraNaru isn't really my think..or NaruGaara, but SasuNaru...aahh..I could just die...but I'm gladly waiting for the next chapter :D
person Etiole
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, good. I like so far. Please update soon!
person Kusachu
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'Look at the foliage of the green leafy trees and the nice strong and erect... His eyes widen.
'Damn!!! Not again!!!' He wailed. 'And I was only looking at a tree! What the hell is wrong with me???'

“Yo. Sorry I’m late. There was this dolphin and I just couldn’t resist stroking him.” Kakashi said with a grin.


BWAHAHAHA!!!!!!! that's hilarious! This is a good start! Cum Cum...*snicker*

I'll definately have to follow up on this one! hahaha! so yeah! keep it up! (((Man i'm feeling pervy...*sigh*))) And Sakura....sigh...*giggle* nasty in a bathing suit...hahahhahahha! why does she have to suck so bad? (((I'm mean in the real story...not in this...))) YAY! *claps for you*
d(^-^)b
person Sukara
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
xD When Naruto started doing himself I started laughing, two reasons;

1.I'm hyper

2.I knew Sasuke heard him xD

*Adds to fsvourties* Update soon,ne? ^_^

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