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August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)
Nice beginning with the sensations. _ _ _ _ I kept wondering for a while whether the room was dark or if Sasuke was blindfolded. Adds to the suspense when you don’t know. =) _ _ _ _ “Because it felt so nice being wanted and acknowledged by the one he had chased for so long. The one he wanted to surpass … The one he wanted to kill.” Those are some really confusing feelings. I wonder how much he really wants to kill Itachi. _ _ _ _ Ah, so that’s where the title comes in, I see. I like the paragraph that describes how the emotions twist. _ _ _ _ I also like the paragraph that describes Itachi’s desire at seeing Sasuke naked. _ _ _ _ The fact that most of this is from Sasuke’s POV and since he’s blindfolded … and Itachi hardly says anything … I REALLY wonder what Itachi’s thinking. And how much he actually feels for Sasuke. _ _ _ _ Awww, that ending was so CUTE! =D
VERY well done. It really felt like they were reacting to sensation and emotion rather than a script. It's got a few grammar errors here and there, but they weren't too bad. And the phrasing was EXCELLENT.
Nice beginning with the sensations. _ _ _ _ I kept wondering for a while whether the room was dark or if Sasuke was blindfolded. Adds to the suspense when you don’t know. =) _ _ _ _ “Because it felt so nice being wanted and acknowledged by the one he had chased for so long. The one he wanted to surpass … The one he wanted to kill.” Those are some really confusing feelings. I wonder how much he really wants to kill Itachi. _ _ _ _ Ah, so that’s where the title comes in, I see. I like the paragraph that describes how the emotions twist. _ _ _ _ I also like the paragraph that describes Itachi’s desire at seeing Sasuke naked. _ _ _ _ The fact that most of this is from Sasuke’s POV and since he’s blindfolded … and Itachi hardly says anything … I REALLY wonder what Itachi’s thinking. And how much he actually feels for Sasuke. _ _ _ _ Awww, that ending was so CUTE! =D
VERY well done. It really felt like they were reacting to sensation and emotion rather than a script. It's got a few grammar errors here and there, but they weren't too bad. And the phrasing was EXCELLENT.
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Highly erotic! I am definitely an Itachi and Sasuke love whore LOL They go sooooooooo well together!:)
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Can't think of anything else to say at the moment, but...wow.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWW!! Shit!!
This is so kick ass!!!
This is so kick ass!!!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've just realized...
I read this fic before but I didn't know,at that time, that it were yours, lolz! ;P
Anyway, hmm..how should I describe it? ...sexy??
Just can't get enough of ItaSazu ;)
I read this fic before but I didn't know,at that time, that it were yours, lolz! ;P
Anyway, hmm..how should I describe it? ...sexy??
Just can't get enough of ItaSazu ;)
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. I don't usually, or have never commented, rather, before now. I liked your writing.
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so hot... this fic is amazing! ;o
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was so amazing!! keep it up
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July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was unbelievably steamy, hot, sexy, full of Uchiha-fluffy-angst (what a contradiction, yet you made it possible and amazing); in short, I loved it--it's always nice to find more awesome Uchihacest that, even as a one shot, goes deeper into their minds and relationship
Excellent job!
~ lg
Excellent job!
~ lg
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing fanfiction.
I really like the needy Sasuke you write, it's very sexy <3 All around very nice - it would be nice to see more well written Uchihacest around here ^^
I really like the needy Sasuke you write, it's very sexy <3 All around very nice - it would be nice to see more well written Uchihacest around here ^^