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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've fixed chapter two, sorry about that my computer messed up while I was posting it and apparently only posted a few sentences of the notes. Enjoy, and remember that I only ask for reviews because if no one wants to read my fic then I don't want to continue writing it, not because I am selfish but because I'd rather not waste your and my time if it's not worth it
Keep safe all ^^
Keep safe all ^^
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh that was just cruel. How you gonna post a second chapter and then it not even be an actual chapter. Please, you have got to hurry and update. Im loving this, is it gonna be a naru/sas. ooooo i hope so, either way, great job. Loving it, please update soon
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good so far, I can't really say I like the format, though, it's a little confusing, and I noticed a few grammatical errors, nothing big though.
Continue.
Continue.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write itasasu
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo, Blisblop, so killing his family wasn't him indirectly insulting himself? riiiight.. I have written half of the second chapter already and asked some friends to review it so far and they think it's good, thinking on putting up a preview of chapter 2 for you guys while you wait
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! I want more! T.T
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I think you should continue and please yes, Itachi is the psycho one, I don't like that when Sasuke "fell in love with is brother". So, yeah! Chapter 2!
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT CONTINUE i'm really diggin this story keep up the good wrok and update soon
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ Enchan~ Wonderful. I love it. ^^ I'm REALLY eagar to read the next part. :3 I absolutely love the way you write. Your detail is amazing. And the way you jump from POV to POV is spiffy. :3 Absolutely love it, Enchan and very anxious to read the next chapter!
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*groans in frustration* Damn, I could kill you. I really had this lovely vision of Itachi holding Sasuke against the showerwall (thanks to my overimaginative imagination)... and then it completely shattered when I read ; Want more? Review first. Aaaargh.
anyways, I like your writingstyle. It took me a second to understand Itachi also had a vision in the story. I thought it was only going to be Sasuke. Shows I'm wrong, ne? ^^;;;;;
So, HELL YEAH!!! I wanna read more!!! I want that lovely picture back in my mind so I can get my perverted imagination on the role. ^__^V
anyways, I like your writingstyle. It took me a second to understand Itachi also had a vision in the story. I thought it was only going to be Sasuke. Shows I'm wrong, ne? ^^;;;;;
So, HELL YEAH!!! I wanna read more!!! I want that lovely picture back in my mind so I can get my perverted imagination on the role. ^__^V