rate_review Reviews

I actually think that this is a very well written story in terms of style and grammar and punctuation and such. As for the story, I think it's interesting enough. If you're getting flames, honestly, those people are dumb because it's rare to read a fic that actually flows. My only comment would be your characterization of Kakashi. I feel like he's a lot less...readable. I don't think that he would normally be so impatient and harsh w/ Team 7 even if he was stressed, just because he's a skilled shinobi who knows how to mask his emotions. I think his laid-back attitude is really a mask to cover how intelligent he really is, so it would be nice if you could show the quirkier sides of his character. I think if you tried to make Kakashi a little more complex, the story would be really great. Like I said though, the rest of the fic is pretty good. Keep going w/ it.