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for Never Forgotten

by SakuraHikari

person -
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no no. dont change anything (other than spellings!) lol :) i dunno why, this fic isn't like other fics, but for some reason, i want you to keep continuing. i can't explain it! so keep writing. something about it attracts me ^^
person Yugiko
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NUUUUUUUUU!!

Dun change Sasuke-teme!!

I like his personality like this!!

VERY bold~~

^^

*squeals*

And Naru-chan with his cuteness!!

>v<

Also LUV the slight Sakura bashin' *wink*

*heart**heart*

Please update soon*_____*
person hinshihoushi
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the idea and look forward to more. I do highly suggest the use of a beta to at least correct the spelling, grammer and just plain wrong use of words, if nothing else.
person ku
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, I like it so far ^^

More chapters!
person minjin00
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lmao..thats a pretty good chapter right there..cant wait for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hee! I have a weakness for these types of stories! (Just don't make Naruto all feminine a d weak and weepy, please. ^^;;) Great fic so far!
person Raiko
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!^^
It's a nice story you've got here!
Sasuke and Naruto are awsome!! Actually, the only character I think is really OOC is Tsunade..(though I don't mind at all!)
You have a pretty good basic idea...BUT!!!..well I'd have a favor to ask you. I'd be more than willing to keep reading your fic cause it's interesting and good and promising, but as for Naruto bearing Sasuke's children well...first: he's a guy..so impossible and even though Kyuubi was a female..it's still impossible...so whatever you do...don't transform Naruto into a pregnant girl or boy or whatever else!!!!! Pleaaassseeee!!!!!LOL
I'm sure you must have a wonderful idea instead!!!!!!....=^_^=

Anyway...that's the only thing I will ask of you..except of course to keep on going!!
If you wish to flame me about this review..well go ahead you have my e-mail add...^___^

Keep it up!!
See ya
Yurikai Kurosaki
person Yukiko
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so Naruto's more feminin now ? And poor him ... I hope he'll find a way to save him.
person Sekkei
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please!
person Jadejj
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my what's going on in that mind of both boys... :P

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