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for A Hellbound Soul

by WhiteLiger

person Nenesama
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh so sasuke's bottom.. yey! heh.. i've always been a sasuke-uke fan.. ( its even on his name!!) its the first time ive read a fanfic where itachi really beats the crap out of sasuke. i mean it was always something to do with uchihacest even if they arent the main pairing.. i hope sasuke wouldnt suffer more, with oro after him and kabuto planning something. and hope you dont mind, i really think they're ooc but its au anyway, and i dont think being ooc here is a big problem. yeah i dont mind, plot's good anyway XD
person Uh....
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chappie!!!!!! I feel bad for Sasuke!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love him like hell!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway... I don't reeeeaaally like Sakura... but she's alright I guess... This is going to be a Naruto/ Sasuke fic right?
person Aya
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Augh, please, please continue soon!
person viciouscallisto
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, orochimaru-sama has an obsession with sasuke-kun! that makes me happy. i like the idea of the fic and i hope you update soon. i want naruto and sasuke-kun to get together soon! anywho update soon!
person Bubblegum
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's getting interesting^^
person poo_n_pee
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i love the idea of itachi being in the gang being all dangerous and mysterious, and that sakura isn't all whiny and clingy on sasuke is nice too. i like the plot and the general descriptions. update soon! bring on some narusasu action!
person Pringle :P
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Niiice :D. Wish there was more ...story in the backstory though i guess? XD; I wish I could explain that better...
person blisblop
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naruto is right .This is confusing!What's up with Sasuke-kun? His brother hates him that much?Damn.Drag.Orochimaru gonna be at least hot in this?Hope so.... This fic is interesting anyway.
person blisblop
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke better learn some sublety,ne?Thank god he didn't get worse.Fuck,not his face,a broken nose.Ok.You have my attention.Good luck with the rest.
person Akelda
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squee~ Sasuke-kun~

Plot is amazingness concentrate =P

Technical stuff, there's some spelling and grammar errors. I suggest a beta reader.

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