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aah!! somehow as soon as naruto said he wanted to visit his father, i *knew* he'd be the one who killed sasuke's parents! ack! NEED NEXT CHAP NOW *cries* ok.. but i'll try to be patient :p anyway, the chap was great, though short, i liked it.. i like how sasuke doesn't think he needs to keep his hands off naruto in front of people now that everyone knows XD and i loved naruto's comment about sasuke pouting like a girl heheh.. ok, yeah, so here i go to wait for the next chapter...

HOLY CRAP!! When I saw that you'd updated I nearly fell outta my chair, I swear I did like a triple take just to make sure that I wasn't dreaming. I adore this story and it nearly killed my to wait the 2 months since chapter 12. I'm just so relieved that you're still writing it, so many author's just abandon their stories just when they're getting good and I was begining to worry you had dropped this one. First off, I completely forget if I reviewed for this story before so if I'm repeating myself, forgive me. I love Sasuke's character, he varies a little from story to story and there are very few who stay with the original personality (or as close as it can get considering it's a SasuNaru yaoi fic) and this one is probably one of the best so far. Secondly, I like the little joural/naration bit that Naruto gives at the beginning of each chapter, they usually result in a string of giggles from me especially this chapter. I'm not much of a writer myself so I don't have anything constructive to say except that I LOVE the story and I hope it's much less then 2 months before you update again because that would assuredly kill me.

Also, your Itachi creeps the hell outta me -__-'

OH NO SASKES NOT GOING TO FLIP IS HE T-T, poor saske, poor naruto. HIS DAD WILL ROT IN THE 6th LAYER OF HELL FOR THIS! o.o' sorry, anyway i love this story and hope you continue to update! >D

I've had this story bookmarked for the longest time, and I regret not reading it sooner. This is a wonderful SasuNaru fic :) Your writing style and the way you've arranged this story fits perfectly, I love it! I love the humour, drama, and your characterizations of Naruto and Sasuke are entertaining. For some reason I can just picture this story as a doujinshi ^_^ <3 I see you haven't updated for over a month, and I hope it hasn't been discontinued. This one is definately worth finishing! *tries to be encouraging*

Grr...aff.net cut off the rest of my review! *shakes fist* Anyways to continue the review: It's basically your writing style that has me captivated. Your descriptions aren't wordy-lengthy paragraphs, but short and to the point. I find that each chapter is like a story in itself, but yet the story flows together smoothly. I also really like how you start each chapter off with Naruto's POV. Well, I noticed you haven't updated for over a month, and I hope this story hasn't been discontinued T_T This is one that is definately worth finishing! *tries to be encouraging*

OMFG! i so did not see that last plot twist coming! omg! where in the hell did you pull it from? i love it! love it! and this fic! it's wonderful. so please keep the chappies coming. thanx. byes!

Wow, ok first of all, this is a great fic and please tell me that wasn't the end! Second of all, I realize these issues are over and done with but I feel I should say something anyway. Alright, I don't understand why people are so upset about you responding to the reviews in the new chapters. I mean at least you acknowledge your reviewers, which is more than some authors can say. I do have to agree that it is a bit of a tease though, making us think the chapter is longer than it really is. To be honest though, it’s not that big of a deal so people really just need to deal.
Secondly of all, I can respect that Itachi/Sasuke is your favorite pairing, but I appreciate that you didn't include that in this fic. I realize that I am on ADULT-fanfiction.net but incest just creeps me out. All of that aside, I have to say that you are a very funny author. I honestly could not stop laughing throughout the entire fic, and that’s mainly why it doesn’t' bother me that the storyline is a bit cliché, because you've given it your own dose of originality. I’d also like to say that there were minimal spelling/grammatical errors which I appreciate a lot. As a result I’d like to salute you and your beta if you have one, on a job well done.
I'm kind of curious though; does it ever come into play who the people are that Naruto's father killed? It doesn't matter, I'm just curious. Anyway, I hope you update soon. I'm dying for the next chapter!


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OMG! Is so cute and sad and wonderful....makes me laugh and cry. and i'd like to see more, so hurry and update! i'm liking the story! even if it took me a little to find it and start reading. it's really good! keep up the updating! ^____^

aww they're so cute together! just like in the anime naruto gets into more trouble than he can handle an all his friends come to help him out-itachi seems to be as much of an asshole as always(somethings never change huh?). i really enjoyed ur story and i cant wait to read the next chapter i hope u update soon-are u gonna go into wat happened to Sasuke's parents and why Itachi is such an asshole?

Not to cliche at all I think, well at least you wrote it with a not to cliche atitude/air around it so it worked out great!

please update soon, I love this fic, I printed it out and tool it to the Dominican with me last Winter ^^!