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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I have a question though. Why did you pick this plot line? Sorry I'm just curious.
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I have a question though. Why did you pick this plot line? Sorry I'm just curious.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this. I like how you are telling this story and I like the internal struggle and drama. Great job!!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic...it's really cool...I really hope there'll come up some more complications...it just can't go so smoothly! hehe^^
continues soon!
huggies!
continues soon!
huggies!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGGGGGGGGGGGG!!
I loooooooove Naruto Sasuke x Naruto!!!! *fangirl squeal* <3 Hehe! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
I loooooooove Naruto Sasuke x Naruto!!!! *fangirl squeal* <3 Hehe! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovely.
sorry i didnt drop in to review the earlier chapters, but i was too immersed in reading.
XD
anyway, sasuke's and naruto's roles fit in perfectly, and that scene with iruka and "LIES", that got me cackling.
tho i would kinda hope that naruto wouldnt be so hard to persuade, since less hesitance = more getting in on scenes with sasuke.
^_^
update, and here's a crate of chocolates.
sorry i didnt drop in to review the earlier chapters, but i was too immersed in reading.
XD
anyway, sasuke's and naruto's roles fit in perfectly, and that scene with iruka and "LIES", that got me cackling.
tho i would kinda hope that naruto wouldnt be so hard to persuade, since less hesitance = more getting in on scenes with sasuke.
^_^
update, and here's a crate of chocolates.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I love tthe way you depict this story. It's truly amazing. =D
I cant WAIT to see what happens next so hurry up and update please!
Thanks!
-Allison
I cant WAIT to see what happens next so hurry up and update please!
Thanks!
-Allison
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! My only wish is that it is longer, but I understand how hard that can be sometimes! Keep it up and I hope to read alot more. I really liked what Shika said about opening a door before exiting. For some reason that totally cracked me up!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU. ARE. EVIL!!!!!!!And I like it XD.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You must continue you ahve soemthing great goign here and I must say
this is the first Naruto A/U fic I have seen before.
this is the first Naruto A/U fic I have seen before.