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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, nicely done! I like this quite a bit, I hope the next chapter come's out soon!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE IT IS A VERY GOOD STORY
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I sooo hope there will be a next chapter.. (grin) Love this story already, update! *.*
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah! You can't leave it like that! >_< More please? *Whines* ^_^
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic idea -- I love it!!! Very clever plot line, and very well done, too....... I look forward to finding out what Sasuke's "revenge" is, lol. ^___~ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fabel-ous ! Cute Sasuke.Nice "cut out" imagry with Sas, the crow in Narutos mouth.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is quite creative! Plus, I normally hate the SasuNaru pairing, but I don't mind it all here! You handle the characters quite well, I can't wait to see where this is going.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww this is pretty sweet story yum anyway write more will ya!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw man! I was all hyped up for Sasuke to 'force' himself on Naruto (Naruto wouldn't want to lose a bet about not being loud, would he ^_^) Still this sounds VERY intriguing. A few grammatical errors but other than that it was very well written. Can't wait to read more.
P.S. I burst out laughing at that "The better to eat you out with" caption. LoL. CLASSIC!!!!
P.S. I burst out laughing at that "The better to eat you out with" caption. LoL. CLASSIC!!!!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
soooooo cute! ^_^ update fast!