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I do wonder how soon is "soon". Oh well. There were a few mistakes but nothing too grave. Those mercers you've been writing about for example. I think you meant "merchants" as in "people trading goods". I'm confident your english will improve the more you write. You might want to get a beta reader who can correct your few mistakes though. Anyway, keep up the good work. ShikaTema pairing forever ^^

I'll be waiting for your next chapter.

DL

PS: You might want to put this story up in the Het-section of Naruto, too. Since there aren't as many stories, it's easier to overlook.

That's very sweet and the characters are well done and realist. PLease continue !!! :D

Please continue!