rate_review Reviews

I love it. The humor, the imagry, all of it. Please, by all means, take it further.

.....BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HAAAAAA!

This is fun to read. I like how the relationship works, keep up the good work.

Wait... I thought "nunc" was "now" in Latin........... oh, wait, that's right! I only got the chance to take Latin 1. *pouts* You, undoubtably, have far more knowledge in that area that I, so......... cool! ^^ Very neat trivia -- I, too, have amazed and comfused friends throughout the years with my pointless trivia that is interesting to me and maybe 2 other people on the face of the planet, but....... *shrugs* It's all good, ne? ^___~ I can't wait for your "real" update... Ja! *scampers off to check her e-mail ASAP* ^^

Oh, I forgot to mention one more thing: about DeadUchiha's comments on commas..... I'm her beta, so trust me, she speaks the truth. *shudders* That girl really IS tramatized by commas........though one would think that she would have at least learned SOMETHING by being in the class, ne? *snickers and glomps DU is she's reading this* You know I love ya', Dead! ^___~ But yeah, anywho, why do you think I put so many "........" in my reviews? Yup, learned it all from her........ *longsuffering sigh* Well, my e-mail's acting up, like always, but I'm gonna' go try again and yell at it a few times. That rarely works, but you never know............... ^___~

Fantastic! Written refreshingly well, and with good humour. Very enjoyable!

*ROWR* BABY. MORE I NEED MORE. THIS IS FRICKEN AWSOME, YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE AND I MEAN SOON!!! PLEASE HURRY AND UUUUPPPPDDDDAAAATTTTEEEEE!!!!!!

man i love this, you are definately doing an excellent job. Keep up the good work and update A.S.A.P.

Haha, that was great smut.. I really liked the way you described their actions near the beginning with the individual words. Good job, looking forward to the next. :)

I'll reply here, as opposed to through e-mail, simply because I have this penchant for typing in 8pt. Verdana font. XD

Anyways, I really liked this edited version better than the original - for some reason, I felt as if the first version of the second chapter lacked something (an ending, I suppose), and it left me with this unsatisfying taste in my mouth. Not that what was already there wasn't good - it's just better in this version. I really like this, though I think I still love the first chapter the most, and I'm anxiously looking forward the third chapter.

Huh, I didn't realize ff.net was making people wait after registering their account to post stories. I signed up for it before they enacted this new change, I suppose, so I didn't think that would happen. Though, I do understand the need to separate your "real life" LJ from your fic one - it should be easy enough to do now that they've gotten rid of invite codes, right? Anyways, I'm very glad to see this new chapter so soon!

**Wolf**