rate_review Reviews

had me bawling... again.
you really have a knaack for this.

now why can't the author(ess)es these days write stories as good as this?!?! i just loved all the angst and suspence in this story aa well as the romance intertwined in it all. i just read this story from ch1 til the end and i just couldn't put it down. all the while wishing to the high heavens and above that it is finished by the time i get to the end and that it isn't just another wonderfully written but discontinued story. -glomps authoress- thanks so much for writing and finishing this wonderful story. i know that you haven't written in a very long while, but i really hope that you get back in the grove and start letting those darn plotbunnies attack you again!!

That was amazing! Never before have I EVER cried on a fanfic I've read. NEVER. But on this fic I cried THREE TIMES! OMG, it blew me away! A piece of me died for Itachi though. I'm so sad for him! I hope he sends postcards often.

Beans

I really liked your story. It had angst and nice plot - all that i needed and ofcourse happy ending which the story deserved. Oh and Sakura and Hinata pairing was wonderful. So thanks for sharing this i had good time reading it!

The best part was the last 4 chapters. Maybe it's just me, but I could have done without all the rape scenes. Good job overall, I was hooked. Oh and thanks for putting in the shoujo-ai, that was just an extra lil present ^_^.

Your story was extermely dramatic and very disturbing.
I am actually really glad for the happy ending. It was angsty enough. Hehe.
I really liked that Itachi was the good one. And I liked you Shizune and loved your Hinata. *smile*

Must say that the best story ever. I cried, I laughed, giggled, gasped. winced in horror- simply loved the fic. I only slept like two or three hours last night because I couldn't just stop reading. Amazing! Goo job!

Thank you for writing this story. It was traumatizing, but I'm so happy you ended it the way you did. The kiss was a perfect way to finish the story, and it was that much sweeter for it. I would love to see a sort of one-shot epilogue for this story, perhaps about Naruto's life with Tsunade and Jiraiya, or Sasuke perhaps visiting his brother, or about their relationship in the future. Just a tying of loose ends, if you will, perhaps set 6 months later or something? That would be awesome.

Whoah - what can I say. That story was intense, I was definitely not expecting the surprise ending. I loved it though. I've just sat here and read through the whole thing without moving from the couch. Now I'm gonna go and read everything else you've written!!! After I go to the bathroom :)

Hello Author,
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

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