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for Trapped Dolphin

by somnambulistdreams

person Ratholin
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovin your quiz hope you can up with more soon peace ^-^
person Gossa
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! continue!! good stuff
person sofi
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there^-^!!
this is the first time I review after reding a fanfic.
And I must say, must say that this one was the best I ever read. It is so sweet and I only want to hug them both and make them not feeling alone anymore.
Hey I almost lost my mind when kakashi woked up after having the dream about him and Iruka. You are evil!! Why couldn't they have eathother then?? T.T I first wondered if the whole story had been a dream or not or if just that day had been a dream.
ok I wont be mean now. I just got so into the characters and feel the pain with them.

And now I am loking forvard to read chapter 7:)

I love this fic ö.Ö How long will it be?? And when you made this, which charakter did you put youself in??

bye bye^^
person snow887
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU!!!!! *glomps* thank you for updating, this chapter was hilarious XD poor kakashi has a rival and an annoying chick after him LOL
update again soon ^^
person MasterLenx
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! HOORRRAAYYY!! I feel so happy now! Thank you! I saw the update date on the story, and i was like, "NO WAY!" but it happened! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHO!! The drama ensues! I am Len Led by the way. Not my real name, but it still sounds cool! *puffs out chest* - don't be a perv about it. lol... update soon again k? Ja ne!
person Sir Magus
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like ur story alot! i still find it hard to believe Iruka is a cutter(i would have thought that was more Sakura's thing) neways i hope u update soon-hey wats ur ym? that way when im tired of waiting for u to update i can go all stalker on u an keep iming u till u update k? plus i could help wit any problems u might have(though i dnt know as much about Naruto as some i have seen all the episodes up to the 3rd part of the chuunin exams plus i am good at comin up wit ideas(im like a muse i can give a thousand ideas to a person but its so hard for me to keep any to myself*pouts*oh well) i really enjoyed ur story i hope u update soon!!
person Masterlenx
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You gotta update! This is like the BEST Kakashi/Iruka story I've ever read... *Nods head for emphasis* so.... you gotta update soon to keep me happy! (Pretty cheap huh? lol..) T_T....^_^...O_O...0_0...o_o...lol... until next time!
person Rini
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey there remember me? well if u don't that's ok anyways so like i said I came straight to aff after reading ur updated chapter on fanfiction and I have to say i like it a lot!! poor kakashi!! he's so uptight sometimes but the funny thing is that I'm a lot like iruka lol!! anyways I hope u update soon I shall await it! >_<
person Lei
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh, I'm kind of confused. I'm confused which part is the dream, and which part is not. Nevertheless, I really like your plot! Way to go!

So you don't have betas? I have an idea what betas do but I never experienced it. Well I did proof read once for a friend. Can I be of help to you somehow? I've finished college and I'm not really doing anything right now. ^^;

person Berylia
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It is very rare to find a depressed Iruka and you are writing it with a lot of accuracy I think. Kakashi is just cute in his kindergarden way of loving: I love you so I shall harass you because I'm to shy... Really a very good KakaIru.

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