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woooooooooooooo , You give me a heart-attacted , I thought you dropped this story , ^^ now , I can read chapter 4 , this 's geat , thanks

please update soon it soooooooooooooooo intersting........(ohh dont mind my sp error caasuse im to lazi to spell) lol.... remember update soon and i mean realy soon..

*gasp* what happened to narut?! and by spoiler do you mean naruto's death? oh my god, you are so cruel!!!!

Actually for a beginner your pretty good in english, your spelling is really very good. I would however suggest maybe a beta for nouns and verbs, though you spell really well, you don't always use the proper form of the words in your sentences, a beta can help you with this too.

I really love this idea you have going on, it is a terrific story keep going.

aha <3

you're updating! love you so much!


please let sasuke rape naruto, i love it! xD

is about time u update! dang i been waiting....................... thank you for updating............. I can't wait for more.... i hope i don't have to wait for months agian for you next update pls update ASAP PLS! ^_^V

Yayy~~~ an updateeee! at last!! i'm already thinking that you abandoning this story... Sorry ^^;;

Naruto reaction sure make sasuke suprised ne?? And i wonder about neji reaction after hearing sasuke's little adventure in naruto land (body) *coughing while smirking* But i don't blame sasuke of course! Naruto is too godamn cute for himself! No wonder sasuke become super perv arround him X3

And i guess this chapter can open new way in Sasuke n Naruto reletonship na? I guess i just have too wait until next chapter~

So~~~~~~~~ *push caTastropHic in front of computer* start writing now please~ X3

WHAT!!!!!!!!! Naruto has an ending TTTT-TTTT I never what it to end!!!!!!!!!! TTTTTTT-TTTTTTT Just thinking that Naruto has an ending makes me want to cry!!!!!!!!!!! T-T This is a cool story so please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

-The Update Monster

aww... this is so yaoi it hurts. update soon! ^^

i want to see naruto in a blue police uniform!

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY XD
YOU FINELY UPDATED GO YOU :o
loved the new chapter although it seemed a bet fast ;)
please update soon please
love
looli :)