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for The Kakashi Mission

by JBMcDragon

person EvilPixie
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much I almost cried when I saw The End I was like noooooooo ahh well this was a really good story and I hope you write more like it. Good job I loved the character development and it was so sweet. Ahh well thanks.
person kakiru
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AN AWOSOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! START YOUR NEXT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person yurathewicked
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* so good. their first time together and SO CUTE! the bit about kakashi's mask makes me really sad, though. it's good, but sad. :(
person Tashasaphi
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really nice. There were some points where it lagged a little, but then it picked up and swirled into snuggliness.

It was touching, and showed a side of Kakashi that I've never thought about before. And a side of Iruka for the matter. It made them really complex, and that, in itself, is awesome.

I can see the effort you've put into this. Thank You for writing it.

Tsx
person Ciar
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh mai Gosh, LOVED this story!!!
So.. SO.... I'm not good with words >_<
Great story, one of the best I've ever read! And I KNOW you are going to do a sequal, right?
*picks up her sword and smiles happily* Because all the fangirls would adore some more sex.. I mean ..ehh.. Yeah right.
SO get on with it!

/Ciar
person lo
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THat turned out to be a very sweet story. Nice job!!! I was really impressed.
person AtsumiHaruko
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not able to write one of those eloquent reviews... all I keep doing is *siiiigh* and *aawww* after reading the last chapter. Thanks so much for this wonderful story! It's one of the few really bright lights in the increasingly darkening Naruto-section. You rock and I hope you're already planning future stories. :D
person Komikitty
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYY!!!
*applauds vigorously*
=^_^=
person ffpanda
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was just wonderful - truly TRULY wonderful!! Thank you for sharing such a fantastic story - I will watch for more from you!!!
person Skins Thunderbomb
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, its all over? That was WAY too soon :P Is there going to be a sequal? I hope so :) Didn't realise you had posted this here as well as Fanfiction.net. Hehe ^_^ seeya!

ST

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