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ah that was sweet keep up the great work and update soon

I love it. >D Just the small talk was so well thought of between them. You gotta update soon. ^^

Yay for Colleen! She now knows how to make me update faster with tempting thoughts of her continueing this... >> Wait. Is that good or bad?

Not bad, not bad. Sasuke and Naruto seem for the most part in character. It'd make the story better if you explained a little about the background information, like how Sasuke came back to Konoha. Also, you never specified if it's NaruSasu or SasuNaru (personally, I like NaruSasu). I like the writing style alot, and there are very few (if any) grammatical mistakes, which is more than I can say about some of these other writers. Please continue.

This was really good. And i would never have guessed that you weren't familiar with the characters, perhaps that's the incredible spice that made you keep them perfectly in character! I loved it, and please... grant me with the next chapter! ^__^ Can't wait to read the rest.

Ooo, very yummy, and I'm not talking about the ramne either. ^_~ Keep up the good work and update as soon as ya can! ^^