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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dang...that burns..really burns. you put heartbreaking and side on a new level. poor naruto, damn village ppl. can't wait till you update!!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please write more. From what I know of Naurto, you’ve kept them pretty close to real, and that’s not always easy to do.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. I was totally thinking "NOOOOOOOOO!!!!" in my mind when I reached the end of the chapter. I wanted to read more ;_; Great start! I absolutely engaged to the chapter. The mood was perfect for me, and the characterizations too. The "mature feel" of the fic felt right. I can't wait to see how this will eventually end up SasuNaru. Till your next update then! I'll be waiting (sometime next week hopefully) ^_~ Thanks!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee... That makes me laugh!!!! I want some SasuNaru, like right now!! We all know Sasuke and Naruto love eachother... Well!! I love it so far!! Keep going!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amazing! really detailed and realistic, I love it! I hope you get a chance to update really soon!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol "it isn't my fault if the council building sontaneously combusts!" That's just the best. *snickers*
When are we going to get lemony goodness?
When are we going to get lemony goodness?
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very funny! I loved it.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
right now, i m denying the fact that this chapter is over. CONTINUE!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good kinda sad thougth
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon!