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person Marielle
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...the 15 year old grew up...


And now the windows and computer screen are fogged...


Must stand under a cold shower...



*runs off to await the next chapter* :thumbs up:
person vashta
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Finally, they did the deed! I hope they keep the baby, but won't that strain Naru and Iruka's relationship, if the babies have to stay apart? Do I see sparks between Cho and Gaara? I would really like to see you try and tackle that. Are Naruto and Sasuke official now? I certainly hope so. I liked the verbal interaction during the lemon, good chap.
person vashta
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, if it is Sasuke, I reckon they will be parents! It won't have the Uchiha bloodline, will it? If it is a clone, then Kabuto implanted a complete itty bitty Oro, right? Hmmmmmmmm, can't wait for the outcome to this!
person Green Rose
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, so he can prove that he's a gentleman... hmmm, is he a gentleman??
Anyways... I know I wouldnt be one... but that's me. Good writing again, I was glad to see the new chapter this morning.
I had something to go with my coffee.
person BballAnimeLover89
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up and save Sasuke, Naruto!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
person vashta
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am glad Gaara is ok, but he is going to have to back off of Sasu, he is Naru's! Ok, I don't think Sasu was implanted because the girls don't survive the birth and Kabuto wanted to keep Sasu, so it must be the other girl behind the curtain, or someone else. I like trying to figure you out, even if I am wrong it is fun. You have quickly become my favorite author, and that says a lot, I have been reading fanfics for years. I finished all of the Fruits Basket fics, and hope you get back to them after this. Well, much praise for another good update, patiently waiting. Oh, did I mention that I like Shika/Neji pairings? Just checking.
person Green Rose
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Just lay there all nice and naked and let me rescue you."
Man, where do you find these witty things??? I totally adore them!!
Ohh, now I want to see the rest too... Good work!!
person Green Rose
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You little shit box??? *lol* Now that's a word to keep in mind. I like it. Well, I'm off to read the rest of the story.
Good work by the way. I like it!!
person Marielle
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep, it's me again. You're "15 year old" stalker.

Another great chapter!

So, I assume this is a prequel to Ino Blink of the Eye (which I'm in love with also! ^_^)?

And ..."whoa"-age on the Preggers Sasuke... That's some rough stuff.

No prob about the info on Sexy Kazekage Gaara and is delicious outfit.

Thanks for the brownie...

And I await the next chapter... but this time.. I'll be "16" about it... ;)
person Serenia
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that has to be my favourite chapter ending yet! *glee*

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