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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ew, sorry about my last review with only one letter -- stupid fingers pressed enter too early or something, pfft.
Anyway, I was about to say: I absolutely adore your fic. Here, have a cookie.
Aside from my happy!love for Sasuke being uke and obsessiveness with just Gaara in general; thank you, thank you, thank you for adding Neji and Naruto into it, too XD! It seems you've read my mind and put it into pretty words, un ^^. Eh, anyhow, I hope you update real soon and all that 'cause, you know, gotta get my smut fix some time or another XD; Bleh, oh well, tah.
Anyway, I was about to say: I absolutely adore your fic. Here, have a cookie.
Aside from my happy!love for Sasuke being uke and obsessiveness with just Gaara in general; thank you, thank you, thank you for adding Neji and Naruto into it, too XD! It seems you've read my mind and put it into pretty words, un ^^. Eh, anyhow, I hope you update real soon and all that 'cause, you know, gotta get my smut fix some time or another XD; Bleh, oh well, tah.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS MY STORY SO YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dude...awesome! This is just the type of fic I've been looking for! *pets it fondly* Nice mental images it gave me too, mhm ^^. And uhm...I think bondage, gay bar, and foursome all sound great, the more the merrier, right? It'd be rather interesting to see how a foursome would work out and a gay bar sounds super fun!
The whole thing was well written overall, there were quite a few spelling errors though, and a few puncutation ones. 'Withering' should have been 'writhing', just simple things like that, and I'm willing to bet that most of them were typos. Evil, evil typos. So yeah, a beta could probably help you clean those up or whatever, and I'd be more than willing to beta this if you decide you want one.
Update soon! ^-^
The whole thing was well written overall, there were quite a few spelling errors though, and a few puncutation ones. 'Withering' should have been 'writhing', just simple things like that, and I'm willing to bet that most of them were typos. Evil, evil typos. So yeah, a beta could probably help you clean those up or whatever, and I'd be more than willing to beta this if you decide you want one.
Update soon! ^-^
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is my story so WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is my story so WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omfg.. that was the best.. i was FOAMING when you started to descripe gaara.. hes my fave character.. and oh god neji and sasuke are so hot XD ahh i cant wait for more chapters!! ^________^ <3
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whooo- weee!!!! *rubs hands together gleefully* this sounds like fun. i say go for the threesome. you know how that saying goes: "the more the merrier". i will definitely be looking out for your next update. so until then, ja! ^__^
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
did i say threesome?! what the hell was i thinking?!! i meant to say go for a foursome! *sighs* i just love me some horny, slutty boys. ^__^