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for Pretty Little Killing Machine

by forgetmenow

person Shaun
schedule January 28, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I love this story you have to continue you are a very good writer very detailed 

person Shaun
schedule January 28, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Also you should get lemon between gara and temari but you gotta keep kankuro out of it please 

person Anon
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hot as hell,love it
update pleazeeeeeeeeeee,it's almost driving me insane,I want to know what happened next
schedule November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is REALLY good! I hope you're able to update soon <3
person Shinee
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love it!
It's definitely worth the wait but I am almost going insane wondering what will happen next,so update please
person Cybella
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! You describe Temari and Gaara so well! I can't wait for the next chapter
person Sin Mortis
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'll admit I'm not much of a incest lover; but frankly this was too well written to stop reading! I demand more!! *clings* FEED ME WITH YOUR LEMONY GOODNESS???!!!!!!!! LMFAO XDDDDDDD *murdered by a fuming Gaara* X__X

Love,
Sin (A.K.A. The Flamer Killer ~ Will give your flamers hell to pay! XD~ Also Sin Mortis from DeviantART and RSG ( inetials..) from Fanfiction.net. )
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. Gaara/Temari is one of my favorite pairings. i really hope you do another chapter soon. i just can't wait to see what happens next.
person WickerWood
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You continued! ^__^ It makes me a million kinds of happy to see an update on one of my favourite sandcest fics. <3

Oh, trust me, you didn't go overboard with the descriptions. The details are what make the fic fun (and hot) to read. XD However, there were a few simple spelling mistakes that a quick once-over would fix. ^_^ ANYWAY~

The fic is progressing beautifully. I really liked Gaara's perspective in this chapter, and I hope you continue to elaborate in the coming chapters. OMG THE NEXT CHAPPY IS SANDCESTY? *dies* I can't wait. Oh, and I really hope you start feeling better. <3
person WickerWood
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF? It cut off my review! O_o Um, yeah, here's the rest! ^_^;;

Oh, trust me, you didn't go overboard with the descriptions. The details are what make the fic fun (and hot) to read. XD However, there were a few simple spelling mistakes that a quick once-over would fix. ^_^ ANYWAY~

The fic is progressing beautifully. I really liked Gaara's perspective in this chapter, and I hope you continue to elaborate in the coming chapters. OMG THE NEXT CHAPPY IS SANDCESTY? *dies* I can't wait. Oh, and I really hope you start feeling better. <3

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