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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this chapter! Sasuke and Gaara showdown! ^^ I want SasuNaru... but I don't want to give up on GaaNaru -.- Maybe a threesome eventually? ::hopeful:: I like the ShikaChouji moment too, hehe. Anyway, I can see the road ahead for Sasuke is tough, but I have faith in him ^^ Write more!!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tear* awww poor sasuke-kun, i feel bad for him in a way.... yet at the same time i want to rape gaara-kun O_o is that even right on some level....hell yeah! poor naru-chan i wanted who's gonna end up as his lover?!?!
~ja.
~ja.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wooow niice! (this is my name rea;;y. i don't know what my parents were thinking) the next chapter sounds promissing!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey
Like your story, very cool. Your beta does a good job. I hope that Gaara ends up with Naruto in the end, too many stories end with Sasuke and Naruto in the end when there's a triangle. Can't wait for a new update
Like your story, very cool. Your beta does a good job. I hope that Gaara ends up with Naruto in the end, too many stories end with Sasuke and Naruto in the end when there's a triangle. Can't wait for a new update
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter ::beams:: Yay for SasuNaru, I wonder what Sasuke is going to do to win Naruto back. I hope they get together in the end! But I don't want Gaara to get hurt! Maybe can do NejiGaara? ::notices Gaara pouting in the corner:: It's ok, Gaara, ::puts comforting hand on shoulder:: You still have me ^^ ::glomps Gaara to death:: (GAARA X ME!!! In my dreams...) Write more and update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* is sasuke just going to be his friend?! what about his never endding quest for love and *smirks* well you know...will Gaara beat him until the white meat shows?! Oh and Neji does Neji have a thing for Naru-kun too in this story? ohhh I'm lovin it. Good chap by the way too. I can't wait until next week, see ya then!
~Ja.
~Ja.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. the thing about kisame seemed a little rushed, but i'm sure it will come up again later. your writing style is very clean and concise and the story seems well thought-out. can't wait for more!
the only thing left to say is: SASUKE/NARUTO/GAARA THREESOME ANYONE?!?
the only thing left to say is: SASUKE/NARUTO/GAARA THREESOME ANYONE?!?
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AW cute! UPDATE SOON!!!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You MUST email me once you've updated the next chapter, I would love to see how this fic out turn out in the end. Very good introduction and I love how you placed the characters right into their role. The plot is very interesting and the Gaa/Naru/Sasu love triangle is excellent, either one of them who'll remain with Naruto in the end will still make me happy ^^. Keep on going and I'll be sure to review all of your future chapters from now on.
-Elk
-Elk
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon!