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for Red Wind Lullaby

by Aleya

person mike
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good AU. at first i was confused but i liked how u brought everything 2gether.
ps: leaD ur a great write and u have inspired me 2 write, thank u.
person Corrina
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story with a wonderful plot. Thank you for giving me such an incredible read. I couldn't peel my eyes away from the story for a second. I kept wondering what would happen next. I feel so bad for Kanna, her problems were actually bringing tears to my eyes. I want to see her happy and in love with someone other than her son Ichiro. I want to smack Itachi. Speaking of the bastard, lol, when do we get to see him again? keep up the great work.
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
person ghostio
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you update again soon, your story is really really good!
person blueinferno
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY YOU UPDATED!! wooot i looove this story! when's Itachi gonna come back in!!?
person blueinferno
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really really like this! and you haven't updated in sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long! *cries* i wanna know what happens next! is Itachi gonna come for her or something? i dont wanna know about Sasuke or Naruto just KANNA AND ITACHI! *sniffles* please?
person MEH
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The insert song was interesting, I trying to find the connection meaning between lyric and story's content. (I am exciting that this will turn to be SakuSasu or ItaSaku ?)

Poor Sakura T_T...How could she find the way out of this problem? (Please, do not torture her much.)

Also, HinaNaru scene was so touching. I like the way they described their feeling.
(Ero-Sennin appeared at the end that made me crack! ^O^ and I think that good for restrained thier relationship for awhile, no need to rush, huh?^_~) At first I quite surprised when NaruHina appeared but guessed/hoped that they will have important role for help/support Sakura in later chapter.
person blueinferno
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty damn good...i like it, you have a good plot going on. writing technique is kool aswell...tell me, was Kanna a virgin?
person blueinferno
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just reviewed but it never came up *scratches head* anywayz i think this is a really good story ^^...i like it! was Kanna a virgin? please contact me and tell meh!
person blueinferno
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh it DID show up...sorreh bout that ^^""

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