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for Captured in Your Eyes

by SuishouTenshi

person Chase
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow this story was amazing i want another one like a sequel were naruto gets prego because he uses his sexy no jutsu xD
person Macy
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I still love this story after all this time. Thanks so much for writing this.
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing idea for a story! Truly genius... the whole Itachi pretending to be Sasuke... I was like :O
person Pukie
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what?! tats it? no sequel? no (real) smex between sasuke and naruto? ...im sad.
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow did it really take you eight months to update? Well i am glad i only found this story yesterday. either way it is very good and i happy to have a chance to read it. i like how even if he didn't REALLY get to be naruto's first he got it in a way. still feel kind of sorry for gaara. I wonder if you will even read this review?
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*whibble* that was beautiful ^.^
person jazzy
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Some angstiness, and some amusing bits and a few good friends ready to hunt down a badass, is always a great reed. Like this story lots.
person Hellagoddess
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Yay! Awesome! Absolutely loved it! Man...you should write a sister-ficton where they kill Itachi and have tender, loving man-sex in front of his dying corpse...lmao! But that's just my lecherous ideas coming to the fore!

Very well done!
person Shingo the Pest
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, thank you for finishing this chapter before leaving! I hope you continue to have fun writing. ^_^
person Rasengan22
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sigh... Second time reading this and wow, still great. The writing itself is phenomenol and almost poetic at times. I still can't get over how this is just 2 chapters and yet has such an impact. I still think that first chapter is f'n damn hot, but the end with Sasuke and Naruto. Just sigh... I love this story.

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