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for Hidden Heartache

by shiinechan

person hypnotic
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was good... update soon, cause I wanna know how sasuke gonna deal with Naruto's plan, and I don't like that girl...she's mean! still i wanna know what happens ok! cause i really love this story!
person losthimagain
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling that his little plan didn't work out that well....... XD Well please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster
person ShinigamiTaishou
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story until now! Hope to see more please! Continue your good work.
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a nice starting pace. I like that you're not rushing the story.
person Feion Phylar
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving it. I always love plotty stories. I just know it's going to get better too. *_* Sasuke and Naruto is my favorite pairing but I also have a little thing for Naruto and Gaara as well. I hope I can see a little ofthem together it'll be sweet. ^_^ So please continue. You got one hell of a story on your hands just keep the good work up.
person shada
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a nice story, I wanted to know if sasuke raped Naruto though? is that the case?
I will just wait and see what happens, It's great story and Update when ever you can
person cibiboy
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great cant wait till ur next ch update soon ok
person mgp
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love! Aw, I just love how this makes me cry so often.
person Billy
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!!!!!!!! that was so hot.
I almost has an orgasm right here.
You sure are good at this... ^-~
person Kativachan(2 lazy to log in)
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent writing. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love Iruka ^.^ He's so sweet to Naruto.

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