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by suzan

person DarkHercules
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've got one thing to say. JACK?! This is the best you can come up with?! I's a JAPANESE anime, full of nothing but Japanese(and some Chinese, I think) names, and you put in Jack?! That like putting a walrus in a herd of sheep. Glaringly obvious, completely out of place, and I'm sorry, rather stupid. The other ones that I've seen so far(Jin and Kira) I have no problem with but Jack? Come on, man.
person Backlash
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool I can't wait till tyhe next update. Sorry but I don't have any ideas for the story. I really wish wednesday would come.
person Backlash
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is it Shukaku? Update soon your getting to the really cool parts.
person Backlash
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is it Shukaku? Update soon your getting to the really cool parts.
person Backlash Wave
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naruto had better not die. He is just to, um what is the word I'm looking for...... Oh yeah awesome. Great chapter. Oh I almost forgot I am sorry for not reviewing more often. It seems like whenever you update I am in a hurry and need to leave so I read and run. Sorry, I promise to review more.
person Backlash Wave
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry. I just noticed two things. FIRST I have been reading this AWESOME story and I forgot to leave a single review. Please forgive me. And SECOND no one else has left A SINGLE MOTHER FUCKING REVIEW. WHAT THE FUCK IS UP WITH THAT, GOD DAMN IT I AM SO PISSED OFF RIGHT NOW. Sorry about that outburst, I was just a little flustered. Anyway update soon. Oh and before I forget what is the pairing in this. (Please god not Naruto/Sasuke)

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