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its a gr8 UPDATE SOON PLS

Woah. *dumps bucket of iced water on self* All hail Queen Sakura and her sex slave Sa--!

That was pretty darn good for a first try at smut. The Ero-sennin woulda been proud to have you as a disciple. XD

Ignoring the English typos and such:

"Onee-chan" means "Big Sister", "Onii-chan" means "Big Brother". Both have long vowels (double 'E' and double 'I'). Oni-chan (single 'I') means something like "Monster-chan".

"Icha" is slang for the root word "iku", which means "go" in english. So the titles mean something like ""Go, go, paradise" and "Go, go, violence". But I think in the licensed comic, they called it "Make Out Paradise"... for whatever reason. *shrug*

That said... Gambare! Keep going! Ya got a great lemony series!

I hope Sakura gets to do the real deal with Sasuke! *ducks*

hi! i read all 10 chapters in a row. i had a tough week at work and your story made my day! i was laughing non-stop in almost every chapter. you kept everyone in character and believable. i can't wait for more! you're truly a genius!!!!

*dies from bloodloss* THAT was great!!! I absolutely loved it!! God that made me... wow... that was awesome. I can NOT wait for the next chapter...I wonder how Sasuke-kun is actually going to read it though... Hmm... closet perv maybe?

Awesome! Great chapter! Oh, Icha Icha means "make out," so make out paradise, or make out violence. So you hit it right on the head! AWESOME! Keep it coming! I can't wait to see how Sasuke-kun reacts!

Oni-chan too? Cause that's older brother. O-ne-chan

Finding sasusaku fics is hard enough, finding sasusaku fics with good writing and with a solid grasp of the characters is nigh impossible. This one is a godsend for us tired of seeing Sasuke and naruto humping like rabbits. Thank you. I do have one request though. Please have sasuke beat the crap out of sai. Lord knows the little bugger deserves it.

This is soooo cool!!! And I have never Heard of Sai. Any chance I can get a link? also please update asap please. I really love this paring.

Awesome awesome AWESOME! Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Man i keep wondering who it is that keeps watching Sakura! I can't wait for Sakura's meeting with Jiraiya either. I'm glad you put Kakashi in it because he always makes a story interesting! =D Update soon!