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by godofcontradiction

person ShinigamiTaishou
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So good! I'm loving your story, so please keep going! I wonder where is Sasuke, hope he will appear soon in your story! Anyway, you're doing a good job! Ja!
person cladissa
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good! It's a pretty good plot so far...I vote Sasu X Naru!
person MedicNinM
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^ How kyute!!!!!! i love teh cinderella-esq type naruto! Heh heh... any pairing will suit me! i just love uke naruto, though! >< can't wait for more!!
person Sasuke_Naruto_Lover1025
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey... Great chapter ... and well story.... duh... anway... I really like it and can't wait to read the next Chapter ... so please update soon.... oh and I also loved the way Naruto and sakura act..... there different towards each here then in the series and it's funny.
person Little Kitsune
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*glomps* AU, AU, lalalaa! And a good one! Cliches are fun, when done right.. as your is definatly heading in that diredtion.
I must cast my vote.. Gaara/Naruto ^^ OR NaruSasu (also seeing someone knock bitch!Ino was nice.. I'm just waiting until it's bitch!Sakura's turn.) I don't hate them, in and of themselves, btu I feel justified when they are made out to be 'villians' in this story ^^.
Anyways, continue! Soooon!
person losthimagain
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok I loved that!!!!!!!!!!!!! "By the way, has anyone seen Uchiha??" that was just so random!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!! I know your going to update tomarrow but just to be sure XD!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster
person Sora Jr
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story It really cool. I can't wait till the next chapter.
-see ya
person Reyn
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! Can I possibly vote again? Cuz I really really wanna see Sasuke and Naruto end up together...and maybe Sakura getting crushed in the process (cuz she's really mean in this fic!)
person kaka-she
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whaaa! Just when it was getting good! Wait, I mean it was all good, it was just, er, getting even gooder...er, better! xD Anyways, please write more soon! I'll so be lookinf forward to it! =3
person KaiwaiiKoneko
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Koneko:Why must you torment me!!! You said that You might put Sasuke in one of those chappies! I want my Sasuke now! I mean Naruto's Sasuke. Come on plz hurry up and put my Sasuke- I mean *Naruto's* Sasuke.
Karuna: Stop lying to yourselve you know that you're in love with Sasuke
Koneko:I don't know what you're talking about Hikari *puts a fake smile*
Karuna:*roll eyes* Yeah right my ass.
Koneko:*surprise* You cursed!
Karuna:*animefall* _-_ Idiot admit you like Sasuke
Koneko: No I don't!
Karuna:Yes you do
Koneko: No I don't
Karuna:Yes you do
Koneko/Karuna:*arguing in the back*
Abunai:You made my kitten angry put her Sasuke in the story now before I rip your pretty head off of your shoulder
Koneko:*blushing deeply* I DON'T LIKE SASUKE BASTERD!!!!!!!!!
Karuna/Abunai:*ironic* Sure
Koneko:I'm going to kill both of you!
Karuna:Eep! *runs for cover*
Abunai:*already had disappeared*
Koneko:Now that they are gone. Plz put Sasuke in plz. /So I can see my love again....I hope she can't read my mind cuz if she did I got my ass in trouble/

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