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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ano sa, grammar point in this sentence: He had went down the kitchen for a little detergent to rid the small stain on his uniform
I guess you meant 'had gone'?
I guess you meant 'had gone'?
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why do u torture me so T_T gimme some sasunaru Pwueseeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!! huhuhuhuhu *dies*
nice chappie by the way ahohohohoho
nice chappie by the way ahohohohoho
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the little quotes at the beginning!
the story is very well written, very few mistakes.
please don't make it sasu/naru. i like the pairing but it is so overdone
neji/naru is one that practically no one does and i don't think i've ever even seen kiba/naru
gaa/naru is a nice possibility
any one but sasuke-teme, far too cliche
you're story is too good for it!
but even if you do decide on sasu/naru i'm certain it will still be an amazing story
good-luck!
the story is very well written, very few mistakes.
please don't make it sasu/naru. i like the pairing but it is so overdone
neji/naru is one that practically no one does and i don't think i've ever even seen kiba/naru
gaa/naru is a nice possibility
any one but sasuke-teme, far too cliche
you're story is too good for it!
but even if you do decide on sasu/naru i'm certain it will still be an amazing story
good-luck!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is this gonna be SasuNaru??... i loove SasuNaru..
update soon.. ^^
update soon.. ^^
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
w00t! this fic rocks! i hope you get to update fast and often 'cuz, *wails* I'll die if I don't get to read more soon! ^_^
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YO!
i love this little cinderella story of yours
i had to read the first couple of chapters before i really reviewed cause i just
wasnt sure but now i know i like it
so i would like to say ...SASUNARU!!
i love this little cinderella story of yours
i had to read the first couple of chapters before i really reviewed cause i just
wasnt sure but now i know i like it
so i would like to say ...SASUNARU!!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love these kind of fics even tho they're so common^^ I'm really liking this fic and kinda like the Sakura bashing. As for the pairings vote...I VOTE SASUNARU!!!...I really don't like nejinaru and gaanaru -but hey! Majority ruleswhen it comes to life. That is, with the exception of an idividual's morals. No matter! I hope you update soon and that my choice vote wins and kicks ass XD
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, but why does Gaara always have to be the bad guy? *sniffles*
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear Author,
I really like the story. I hope you make more or finish this (grin). It is very interesting that you put Sakura as a cousin (laughs) and Neji as a friend........ or making him more than that later. I do not know (nervous laughs) you make the story. [bonk on the head with a sqeaky hammer]
I really like the story. I hope you make more or finish this (grin). It is very interesting that you put Sakura as a cousin (laughs) and Neji as a friend........ or making him more than that later. I do not know (nervous laughs) you make the story. [bonk on the head with a sqeaky hammer]
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay .. cute AU story.. just bring Sasuke there :)