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May 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Older sister would be "onee-san," "onii-san" is for older brother. ;)
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loooove this! I really do hope you just keep it gaara/naru and don't add sasu/naru. There's enough of them already. -_- Not that I don't like it. XD Anyway, I'll be looking forward to the next chaptre. ^^
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good so far; I'm interested in seeing just how things progress. I did notice two mistakes, though:
1) It's Sunagakure, not Sunakagure.
2) Gaara referred to his sister as 'Oni-chan', whereas he should have referred to her as 'Onee-chan'. Onii-chan is brother.
1) It's Sunagakure, not Sunakagure.
2) Gaara referred to his sister as 'Oni-chan', whereas he should have referred to her as 'Onee-chan'. Onii-chan is brother.
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want an UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
-The Update Monster
-The Update Monster
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good, but japanese typo; Gaara calls Temari oni-chan in your story- that means brother- one-chan would be sister or is he was being informal ane-chan