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by Erisabesu

person neko kunoichi
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You are such an awesome writer, keep up the good work! IruxKaka is my favorite pairing, and sasuxnaru seems to be a pretty good one too. :D
person Billy
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read it all again.
I love this story and really hope that you continue it for a long time.
person monchy
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very descriptive. LET THERE BE MORE SASUNARU MOMENTS!!!!!
person lain
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! You updated ^^ I love how you describe everything! Especially Sasuke's injury. Awesome chapter. I heart Kakashi x Iruka ^_^ Great job!
person diamond_princess2006
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg kakashi and iruka are so damn romantic and so danm HOT !!!! i really did enjoy that whole chocolate thing and there is so much emotion between them it makes be feel all giddy inside i hope sasuke and naruto confess soon so they can get down and dirty too ! anywho good job ^_^
person DevilLived
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi and Iruka are so cute together! And they're both perverts! XD


Anyways, awesome chapter, great job! Update soon, okay?
person Jassy
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was amazing! I love the way you managed to tie in two very sexual relationships!!! <3<3 You must update soon!!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
such delicious smut! and of course the plot/characterization is great too! ;)
you will be writing that shower scene won't you?
person shadow's neko
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this story... nice way of writing too!! but!! ... theres almost always a but.. i know.. theres too little sasunaru actions in comparison to the kakairu.. not that im against them but we all know that we need more of sasunaru... its an universial fact... =p good job!! keep going~!
person Maij
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I´m falling in love with you, really! This is so great. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
But there is one thing I´m asking (ofcourse you don´t have to do it, if you don´t want to) : when you´ll write the scene where Sasuke and Naruto the first time have sex, please don´t make it a cliche. Meaning don´t make it all go smoothly. They can have mind blowing sex in the end but ususally first times are always atleast a little bit difficult.

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