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for Problem No. 1

by darktsuzukiasato

person dip
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you (insert really bad name calling here) ! how could you leave us hangin like that ??? this looks like a really cute story, please finish ={
person Gold Silk
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute and well-written. Can't wait to read what happens after the "Until..."
person kagaya
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so this is your story... No, I never read your story before, and I generally don't give curt critique when I leave a review. When I review someone's story, I sign in to do it, because that's how I set my reviews, so people who want to leave a review for me to read have to sign in as well. ^^; As for your story, I can't say much about it right now, because it's still a prologue, but it seems like a promising start. Keep writing, ne?
person snow887
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!!! damn cliffhangers ^__^ lovely fic please write more
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
until what? UNTIL WHAT??! this was getting so good!!! sasuke can't have dumped naruto! or has kakashi caught his eye?! uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttte!!! i really wanna know... *whine*
person Gingitsune
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger!!! hahah I really am enjoying reading this story..... I love Iruka and I can't wait to see who you are going to pair him up with. More? *grins*
person sweet
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh come on!
that's no fair, leaving a cliffy
continue please!
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! more iruka love! there should be much more of it in the fandom... and i can imagine him being the most eligible man! i also heart your use of ()'s as they were very fun to read. i hope to read more very soon!
person Kagaya
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a lot of rambling.

Nice story...but less inner rambling please?
person losthimagain
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Did Kakashi do some pervish??? We need to get that man a job....... Please update soon it's really cool^^!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Monster

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