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for The Fire Within

by loche606

person blue_genjutsu
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd say that was Kyuubi and not Naruto that is clawing at Sasuke's window! Can't tell if Sasuke understands the difference. :)
person Psylocke
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah!!! You can't just leave it like that!! (hates all cliffhangers with a passion, lol)

Hooray for Kyuubi!NaruSasu!! XD will we see more of that? As well as some of "ordinary" NaruSasu? :3
person ladygizarme
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nyaaaa ren! you are so sadistic!! but i love that about you! XD evil EVIL cliffie again too! oh my, how i love bloody sasuke.. and that he was turned on by it too! mmmm yummm ..wtf is wrong w/me??!! XP XP well you KNOW you HAVE to write more of this SOON, ne?? ne??!! onegai?? *purrs w/puppy eyes* :p

love ya
~ lg
person Rei
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EEEEVVVVIIIIILLL!

keep up the good work!
person Houseki
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn dood...Naruto hit a vain or something?? lol and you brought out the lust-filled kyuubi on sasuke?? what'd he ever do to you? :p anyways...sounding good...can't wait to see what happens next. dominate naru is hot..but not with kyuubi in control...although a scared uke sasuke is really hot too...damn i can't decide!! nya..you decide then :p ^___~

love ya

~Tsuma *haha*
person losthimagain
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD!!!!!!! What a great way to end a chapter! Thank you and please update soon!
person kyuubigirl
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes, yes, write more. i like how blunt your boys are, there's no real messing around. don't worry so much about getting to the boot-eh. i'm pretty content with how things are going, i actually kind of liked that sasuke told naruto to go home. i was like hmm... but then i was like good boy! it made it even hot. so... did you write another chapter yet? stop reading this and write! hehe
person Houseki
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe sweetness dood...you pulled a me when I first started writing BP..two chaps in one day. coolzies ^__^ Yeah..we have been in a heavy Naru-mood as of late, ne? We've been watchin the shit out of it...glad you wrote this on your day off...hope you continue it too...it's really cute. and wow dood...was that a hint of dominate naru?? hawtnessssssss!!!!!! hehe *does nice guy pose* ^___^V *and eiji pose hahahaha*

love ya

General
person ai-chan
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dats soooo cute!
i love how yooh ended chap 3~
cute cute (-^^-)
keep up the great work by giving us chap 4 soon! <3
person ol
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fun

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