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that was very sweet and cute ^_^

Iruka will definatly not burn in hell :)
He...Did a good thing!.....Yea
See how much happier Sasuke is :)
Yes Iruka and Sasuke can come to heaven and live with me....
Satan: BULL SHIT! Thats a sin if i've ever seen one! Their comin' with me!
GOD:um....no. Im god and if i want to make sweet love to Iruka and Sasuke I can. You can have Naruto
Satan: AND KAKASHI!
God: We can share Kakashi....
Satan: GOD DAMN IT! You always get the good ones.....
GOD:BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA......

That was so cute I loved it :3

omfg...........i absolutely LOVED it......very good characterization of Iruka...and for a first shota it was amazing!!! and the fact that Sasuke likes to cuddle made my day ^__^

Hey i jus thought id pt out some mistakes i found:

He knew that Iruka wouldn’t, couldn’t tell anyone that Sasuke like do cuddle.

* sasuke liked to cuddle

“He will not settle for nothing less the highest scores.

* THAN the ?


Perhaps I should confront him and talk to him, ask him why he’s picked up a habit and follows me around everywhere?’


?and follows?


but LOL that was aight, sasuke was a bit OOC tho my fav line?



“And why would that boy be angry with such a cutie like you, ne… I-ruu-kaa-kun?” singsonged the jounin.


LMFAO i LOVED that line hahaha i love ur kakashi ! you should write kakaxiru ! if u ever do plz tell me !

felt very sorry for sasuke and shed a few tears!!! this was really gud

it was a really great story full of detail...and very good for a first time not to mention

I liked it. It was emotional, better than most of the fics out there.

please write another Irusasu fic...this was HOT!! *fans self*
~ there isn't enough irusasu fics *begs*

So. HOOOOOOOOOOT! *drooling at the mental image* there were a few spelling mistakes in the beginning, but that doesn't matter ^_^ This was awesome, I wanna read more like this! ^_^