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for Heaven's Favor

by Excalibur1751

person Anon
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I say go with Ten-Ten. She always seemed to be less bitchy...

Keep up the good work!
person smokey
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. Also, I don't know about anyone else, but I don't really think Naruto and Sakura fit together. My vote is Ten Ten all the way.
person blueinu
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it alot i just wish at the beginng of the story that you could have put in the main chaacters backstory,but oh well it worked well.

As a pairing not Sukura she is to much of a bitch to Naruto,and he takes it from her.It is something i will not try to understand!

1)Tenten-is cute,pratical and down to earth and not to overbearing of a anime character,well anyway maybe just a tad violent.But on the other hand can you blame her with the career choice.

Ino-is a more attractive version of Sukura in looks personality wise they suite each other.
person narusaku
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!
person eplosivefruit911
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*chuckle*I think it would be infinatly interesting to read naru/saku/tenten....VEEERY fun...;DLove it so far!i was wondering when someone would write one of these...
person Thomas
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a good story. Oh and I think you should pair him up with Sakura, although pairing up with both Tenten and Sakura is nice too.
person LDD
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tenten, because naruto's so hung up on Sakura in the show it hurts to watch, ne? Sides I don't think I've read a Naruto/Tenten yet, would be cool. I like the story and your OC's are interesting, do continue.
person jboat1
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'Kay, looks good so far! Keep up the good work! ^^

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