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for As the World Falls Down

by dragonflyelj

person Lunar84
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing to say the least. You have a very originial idea for this story and I love it. I know that RL can get in the way of writing but I engourage you to finish this piece. You are a wonderful writer. You write with such passion and detailed scenery that makes me feel like I'm actually there. Though this story isn't finished, I believe this will become an all time Naruto favorite. Please continue to write. You have an amazing gift that I hope you continue to share with others!
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH!!! How sad!! Please update soon! You can't just leave it at that! Update!!!!
person LyeLye
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm...I was a bit sorry for itachi...And damn is he hot...And damn ...the eyes thing was hot to. >.>
Damn im starting to sound like a pervert lmao. Anyways write me when you update i want her to snuggle against itachi on a lonely night
Or atleast thats what i would do... >.>
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i need more!!! i love this story, its definitely one of my favorites, love the small lemony part VERY hot!!
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please update! I re read, and re read and re read the story, I must have more!
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. Unlike many here it actually has a plot! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh pretty please write more?! Loving the story so much!
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes.

The imprisoned man, the inexperienced girl, the teasing, the slow realization of desire...

Delicious.

I can't wait to read more.
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this finfiction. Please keep working on it!!
person jen
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story. at first i thought it was so twisted, but that's what makes me keep on reading! please post the next chapter up asap! or better yet, email me when you do =). this story is one of my favorites on the whole site... plus i like itachi/sakura pairings so much more than sasuke/sakura.

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