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Awesome, very well done, I was sure it was Sasuke and Naruto! Very nicely written too, I hope you have some more fics for me to read! :D

^^ it was gorgeous. especially wen well with the music i was listening to. some wierd classical music and then as it ended the beat went up and it went faster... till it stopped with a bang. *grin* :D it was very nice..but um... you tricked me. /:P

Oh My God...
I was like...
SO SURE
SOOO SUUUREE
that this was NaruSasu
You have NO idea
at the end I was just like, "Nani?!"
Well written though.
congrats.

i thought it was NaruSasu to b honest....

I didn't know who it was until the very end. I know I was picturing Sasuke and Naruto, but that's because they are my favorite pair! ^.^ Great Job! It was hot and sexy.

It's Shika and Neji! So cyuute! ^w^

I actually thought when it mentioned long hair.. That it was Orochimaru and Jiraiya as kids.. >_>

Oh my - that was hot AND cute. A combination I absolutely adore. And a ShikaxNeji even! Keep on writing like this! ^_^

^^ *purrs* I loved it!

Nice and hot!

Steamy, even! ^^lol

Well, my guess, at first, was Sasuke bottom, because of the black air comment...
I thought naruto top, even though I dont usually go for him in any position but uke (^^lol)..

Then i thought Sasuke bottom again, but with Neji as top!

Until I noticed the mention of LONG silky hair, in whatever way you put it, I didn't think Neji, but then I did, but couldn't fathom the laziest Nin of Rookie 9... ^^lol

I see him more of a bottom, you see, with the fact that he wouldn't have to do too much... ^^lol

I liked it though..

The fighting to sit next to each other part was kawaii!

Great job!

10 outa 10!

some really great lines there.

I personally thought the pairing was sort of obvious; there were too many little clues in the text that gave it away. That could have been just me though *shrugs*, either way I liked it.

Ah I was only half right!!! I was at first going Nar/Sas..then it was Nar/Nej all the way up until the end when the hair time came into play...then I was like..'hmm only shika and neji have their hair tied back, wth? is it sas/nej?' lmao And then when I went back through in the beginning it should have been blantenly obvious when he said he wasn't talking and no one would care as long as he wasn't complaining. *sigh* Ah well, that was an excellent ficlet! You're a very good fic-ka and I'm about to check your profile to see if you have any thing else to read!! ^__^ mmm I am in dire need of Nar/Shika...perhaps you could fill the void of good Nar/Shika fics and write one up? *bats eyelashes* ^__~ Hehe would be awesome, I'd write one (pretty tempted too) but I got loads of other fics I need to update so I'm gonna have to hold off or put it in my 'Plot Bunny' folder.

Anyways, thanks for the entertainment of excellent writing skills and a cute, but short, story ^__^

Houseki