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for Dragon Parlor

by Ashrey

person Kari
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far! Can't wait to read what happens...Naruto sounds possitively yummy! Oh, and your drawing is very sexy! ;3
person Rei
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this alot !
I'm hoping you'll update weekly at the most ^-^
person KakashiSanzo5790
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!
i am so fucking in love with your story!!!!!!!!! ^.^
it makes me so happy!
and who the hell cares about grammar...we're not in a high school english class!
o god....i can't wait until you update...i want to read MORE!
i lied..i HAVE TO READ MORE!!!!
update soon please! ^.^
person ai-chan
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ouuu~
i lyke (^^)
i love these kinds of plots~~
keep it up!! <3
person Mimi Hyuuga
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah, killer drawing!! Naruto is the smex! hehe ^__^ very good chapter, I feel so sorry for Sasuke - having to be around ultrasmexy!naruto without being able to jump his bones - yet! Sai was a nice suprise, I love him to death, I only hope that he is a form of competition for Sasuke. Jealous Sasuke is the best! But whatever role he plays will be good, since more Sai is always a good thing. I can't believe I used to hate him >_<

Ok, i'm getting carried away and babbling now, lol. Kick ass chapter, amazing drawing, and now i'm completely jealous ^_~ I can't wait for the next chapter, this story is really shaping up nicely!
person Inuyasha_is_mine
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.o awesome drawing of naruto he looks very edible ;3..and kyaaa i just cant think of how sasuke might look *drools* anyways i loved your story, poor sasuke and his drinking xD cant wait 4 the next chapter you did an awesome job for sum1 whos english is not there 1st language ^^...ja!
--ruby
person themirror
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! i want more! ^_^
person xBunni
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mou~~~ >< Ashrey-san is so mean na no da!! oo *sobs* Demo I just can't seem to get angry at ashrey-san when askrey-san produces such a great fic opening!! ^^ *glomps* Ashrey-san no monogatari ga watashi wa hontou ni daisuke desu!! Anou sa... I hope you understood that~ ^^;; Demo daijoubu desu ne~ It's a good thing!! ^^ I'm really looking forward to the next chappie and you and your beta have done a brilliant job too, it makes this fic a true pleasure to read~ I hope the next one will be longer though.. ^^;; Ah!! And um... Anou so anou sa... Could naru-chan be the uke??! oo *sobs and begs*
person Psylocke
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NaruSasu, NaruSasu, NARUSASU!!!!! lol sorry but I'm addicted to that pairing, and unfortunately it's not as popular as sasunaru *growls*, so it's always great to come across more NS fics! :)
Very good beginning, can't wait to read the rest!! :D
person wendyghost
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! hope u update soon!

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