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February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So.. I return to AFFN after years, to find that they axed a great bundle of profiles and stories (including mine!!) I had a really hard time finding anything for my NejiTen craving... In fact, yours was the only decent story that came up in a search.
Beautifully written, lovely cadence to the words, descriptions tell everything without the need for coarse language (and for that I admire you). Characterizations were true, love the lead in to the actual scene (not too rushed).. It was a pleasure to be able to find your story. =) Thank you for somehow reviving your account (I see that this was written in 2006)... Guess I need to go about getting my (markedly less tasteful) fiction back up on the site =p
- AG
Beautifully written, lovely cadence to the words, descriptions tell everything without the need for coarse language (and for that I admire you). Characterizations were true, love the lead in to the actual scene (not too rushed).. It was a pleasure to be able to find your story. =) Thank you for somehow reviving your account (I see that this was written in 2006)... Guess I need to go about getting my (markedly less tasteful) fiction back up on the site =p
- AG
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! good stuff! Very stimulating!
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh how i love you for this. <3
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.o That was absolutely delicous!! MORE MORE I WANT MORE!! ^__~
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a very well written one shot. I mean, you really have a way with words. You did a fantastic job, but you did leave me wanting more. By nature, I'm a curious person, I can't help but to wonder what made Neji sneak into her house like that in the first place.
I look foward to reading more of your work. =D
I look foward to reading more of your work. =D
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really good written! - nice oneshot!
she's right... not everything we do need to be explained... sometimes you just have to enjoy what you do/get ^^
i liked the way you've described the charas! - their thoughts and feelings!
she's right... not everything we do need to be explained... sometimes you just have to enjoy what you do/get ^^
i liked the way you've described the charas! - their thoughts and feelings!
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was both hot AND beautiful. You have a wonderful way with words, I have to say. That was amazingly written. One of the better one-shots I've read in a while. Bravo.