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for The Top Floor

by mirandler43

schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that... was wonderful. it was so... like you said, real. i really wish my vocab was bigger so i could tell you how much i really liked this chapter. i laughed, i 'whoa-ed', i was even suspenseful. this chapter was great. and, with kiba, i think it's both great and sad. i mean, yeah he finally gets out, but he'll be leaving his 'family' behind. unless of course, they want him for some sinister reason...

anyway, i can't wait until you update next, i love this story so much!!
person animehead
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! Everything turned out beautifully! I loved it. I simply loved it. I am pretty speechless right now, but this chapter was worth the wait trust me. The two of you did great!!!
person Carolyn
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you continue this story. It's amazing. I really like the plot and your characterizations. It's different from any other SasuNaru story I've read. ^_^ Keep up the excellent work.
person Disgraceful_soul
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! It's been awhile since I checked up on this story. Gotta say, I bloody hell love this story. I missed it while I was gone, the NejixShika part was smexy. Never actually thought about that pairing before, I was actually disturbed by it. But you completly make it seem like it's meant to be. Few authors are able to do that, nice going ^^ Love the story, hope things work out! Hope to read more soon! Ja ne
person VK
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I almost cried! That was really awesome. I forgot around this story for a few months then I remembered. Because it's that effin' awesome.


I ¢¾ you. XD UPDATE...please? :3
person Me Love You
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG! Another Chapter that my stupid self missed like twenty times. lol. Anyway, As usual it was pretty damn awesome and I completely love it more then words. I love the writing, long chapter and the over all Fic together so I just want you to know, I.Love.It.

Thank you soooooo much for writing this! It makes my day!
person Minen
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
have been waiting for another chapter for years now.. sight.. at least it feels like it:P I absolutly love *LOVE* love this story.. will an update be possible.. soon.. pretty plz? me want me want^^ anyhow.. uhm.. yeah.. have a nice evening^^

nu har vi väntat länge nog:P
person j
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!

plzzzz update soon

i think my eyes watered a wee bit at the end

but i dont know if that was because of the seperation

or because that was the last chapter =(

but this story is REALLY good

its a break from the typical stories

not too fast

not too slow

and very creative

keep it up

and plzz update soon

person americanXminority
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Sobs uncontrollably* Why...WHY ISN'T THERE MORE?!?!
Waaaah!!!
P.S.: I can't really recall if we were ever told what Shikamaru was in for...?
person Ayame
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG that was halarious omg I absolutely love this fanfiction it rocks! and you do to because you wrote it*eyes glimmer*

Guess what!

*you say*what?

YOU'VE GOT A FRIEND IN ME! :D XD

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