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Hey I liked your story, I mean you have a nice adaptation of sensitive pornography. Chapter two was nice i like the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. (sorry about the spelling) I'm hoping there is more and looking forward to it and I am ooohhhh sooo happy you had Iruka and Kikashi in there I love them ^_^ I wonder where your going to take the story now, as I said my fav part (aside the sex) is the interaction between the characters. The friends were a nice touch also even if they were to straight for my liking ^_^ So please continue the story and if you do I will write a Shinka X Kiba fic for you ^_^

Peace
Chris

Another fantastic installment to the story. Completely original this time. Last time I commented on this, I had a bitch about Sasuke being the uke. I change my mind. I like it. Cept...I thought perhaps he was a bit cold after the sex in the toilets. Most people don't start arguements after they've sexed...esppecially boys. They more about...*____* for a while. But I mean, it's still good. And that's just my opinion. And the fact I read it all rather than just the sex bits (I'm a boy, what do you want from me) means I obviously enjoy what you're writing. Can't wait for the next installment! =)

aww, i'm really really glad you continued :). i like the way you write, and there's never enough of good narusasu *nod*. keep upthe good work :*

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THIS IS AN AWSEOM FIC!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON@!!!!!!!!!!!!

P.d:if you have done it wanting to mix the two series, then I have to apologize.Then you would have to put it in the summary.But if you have done it hoping that nobody realized that,I don't like you, I don't hold people who plagiarize other works . Sorry for my English

that was so good. i love submissive sasuke. i can't wait for the second chapter.
great job!

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What more can I say? I like....... lol

this fanfic is so original and pretty good, the only failure is that this is plagiarism, you ar a cheater. Why I'm telling you that things?...well,I have seen "sensitive pronograph" too

sensitice pornograph!!

OMFG!

I *love* this xDDD

So awesome, and such a cute idea~~
Thanks SO much for not making Sasuke all typically uke-ish~~(even with the whole rabbit reference)

Ah..xD I was laughing at the end at everyone's reaction, so funny.
Ooo, I can't wait for the next chapter, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ^__^