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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, Keep going !!!
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, please update soon.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omt! this is totally good! you have some serious talent. there were just a few spelling errors, that i couldnt help but pick out because i beta stories sometimes, but as far as everything else goes... *cries* poor sasuke!!! and naruto!!! *cries harder* i dont want anything bad to happen to them! *sigh*
update very soon Dai... im warning you!
-sk
update very soon Dai... im warning you!
-sk
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story with a great beginning.
I hope you'll continue your work! ^^
~Karite~
I hope you'll continue your work! ^^
~Karite~
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more...please? I really like the first chapter and am really wanting to read more.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yikes~ A vulnerable Sasuke is an adorable one ^^. Naruto sounds wickedly cool. I can't say much 'cos it's only the first chapter, but it sounds great so far, I'd love to read more!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is sooo cute i love it