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for Angel's Touch

by ArtemisSensei

schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I liked this chapter. It's not often that authors can, or will, stop for a moment to show development in side characters, and you did it well, even while keeping it tied to the main story with Naruto and with Sasuke and co. I love your Lee, too; he's very in-character, which is surprisingly hard to come across as well.

I'm going to skip the obligatory "update soon" because I would be a hypocrite if I demanded speed on your part. But I am looking forward to seeing what's going on with Naruto and Haku. :)

peace and love
person CrescentMoon Alchemist
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg this story rocks!! -gai sensei pose- i love it!!!!!!
person Yuri-san
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You said: "Holiday specials are kinda hard to. And if reviewers don’t leave funny or thought provoking questions, it affects the special."
>_>;;; *didn't leave a question*
... ... ... *cough*
Anyways...

OMG YAY!!! Lee and Gaara!!! I'm really starting to like this pairing! I saw the funniest icon about them on LiveJournal. It said:
"One has no eyebrows..." -picture of Gaara-
"The other has enough eyebrows for two men..." -picture of Lee-
"Clearly, it's love!" -picture of Lee and Gaara-
XD I thought that was so funny! It's really cute looking! If you want to see it, here: http://www.livejournal.com/allpics.bml?user=red_rahl

Keep those chapters coming! =^_^=

person Sama
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Girly I'm just telling you I'm a big, big fan of your story and love it so far!!! I can hardly wait for more chapters but I found something that would go great with your story!! Please check it out! Its a awesome video/song I thought u'd love! Ttul!! Keep up the great work! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xsl0w5mVsrA
person --fie
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story rockz... it's the first time i read it (the whole thing actually)... hope you'll update pretty soon... (^^,
person bloodyrose
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*nods* this is a nice chapter, it's starting to reveal a bit of gaara's personality, though i'm not really a fight scence person i adore the way gaara tried to protect lee ^_^
person ClosetEmo
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brill chapter!

The fight was really good and I could picture it easily in my mind as I read it.Im really looking forward to meeting more of the bad guys!

Will Kabuto be one of the bad guys?If Orochimaru is the main bad guy then I imagine Kabuto will be one of his loyal devil beast supporters.

Wow you completed Twilight princess in 4 days im impressed ive only just got to that snowy house temple thing and im stuck again!And yeah I really like Midna as well.

Cant wait for the next update I love this story :)
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Looks like Lee and Gaara protecting each other. Great chapter!! Please contineue!!!
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay new update =D
and naruto's hair in your flash game is funky =P
anyways, keep up the good work ^_^

Your new self-promoted #1 Fan
-Kenneth ^_^
person CommGonn
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^heh, forget to enter the name thing for my last post -_-;;;

-Kenneth

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