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for Colourless Vanity

by Cepheus

person jess
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's kinda' ridiculous... how much i freakin' love this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ this is super exciting... what will happen when naruto meets itachi?! (besides what will eventually happen... aka yummy sex! :P ) ahhhh! you are so cool! i can just imagine naruto in his little anbu-in-training outfit, so cute! i love itachixnaruto!!!!! please please write more soon, becuase this is really really great! *HUG* i love you! *kisses* thank you a million times over!
(p.s. i noticed that you make a few funny mistakes with word choice... like "take his own decisions... and do his own mistakes" instead of "make his own decisions... and make his own mistakes". I say funny because your grammer is amazing and your style of writing is quite beautiful... i was just wondering if these mistakes are typos or if, perhaps, english is not your first language? not that it matters... this story is freain' a-ma-zing!! and it is clear what you mean to say... i was just curious! ^_^ love you!)
person tortilla lady
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really love the way this story is progressing!!! please update soon, it has become one of my favorites and i want to see what happens!!!
person angel
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!!! Please finish it! i got to know what his mask will be.
person tortilla lady
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhh.......i want more.............please update soon!!! i'm addicted & i need to know what happens!!!!!! so why is itachi innocent???
person Jordan
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is such a good story i soooooo cant wait till the next chapter you soooo Rock XD
person Exotic Rose83
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved It! So interesing too this whole ANBU thing. I hope Sasuke won't treat Naru bad anymore, and i wonder how Itachi will interact with Naru...i hope you update it soon!
person Dark Toy
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH..............!!!!!!!!!! *gasps*
I knew something fishy was up to Iruka! and, by the way, It's good to look at Itachi with a raven mask... goes with him. (Is it raven or crow? aren't thme the same shit...? ok... need to get classes of english anytime soon)
Naruto... ANBU... I wonder... what animal? the kitsune is waaaaaaaaaaaay to obvious, and painfull for the kid. Who knows... Surprise me!
So far so good!
I love your writing!
UPDATE SOON!
person LonelyDove
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yaaay... you finally updated..love the story so far ^_^
person Teki
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Zomg I love it so much!! Like so much thats its shocking!!!!!! I can't wait for your next update, so please do so soon!!!!!!!!! ><
person Zrina
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is gonna be one helluva ANBU team!! Can't wait to read more :D

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